poem

[Perfection]

Arsenic
poison, poison, poison
Where and why, lure
thirst for something that isn't there
or was it there

Banging pots, mindlessness
shrivelled corpses hiding themself
captivated by the charm of
noone,nothing, no one, nothing,

Alone, singular
so many words that do not rhyme
cost us all, a single thought
snap!, there..now we're in time..

I care? - care you..
numb sensation, cold and withering
need warmth, dripping in darkness
Black hole, suffocation, claustrophobia

Acceptance, love
Devourment of the sweetness
Addiction, sugar
Acceptance, let us love.

Yeah, poem I wrote I haven't edited properly. I just wrote what I was thinking.

Okay so I'll spill some meaning about it so yous all don't think I'm some whiney, emo, sad person. Lol

I'm only giving you a little though because I write best when I'm up late and it is now 11:31pm, I should be getting to sleep as I have to wake up at 6:00am. The horror- anyway onwards to Self Critical Analysis.

"I care? - care you..
numb sensation, cold and withering
need warmth, dripping in darkness
Black hole, suffocation, claustrophobia"

This is not a metaphor for myself. In basic dialogue this is what I meant. Remember people I am tired so Its basic!

"I was referring in my head to how people on the street in cities , there are so many of them and no one talks, how you can be so alone with so many people around you, and the claustrophobia signifies you being around so many people but not being able to say anything, as it seems "morally" wrong to talk to someone like you know them, when in fact you don't.  "It's not right to talk to someone you don't know" your considered a stranger just as everyone else is.

Okay so now that that stanza is done, I'll now explain the last stanza of the poem.

"Acceptance, love
Devourment of the sweetness
Addiction, sugar
Acceptance, let us love."

Acceptance being my partner and I, being lucky to share love itself. "Devourment of the Sweetness" resembles human need for love. Everyone wants it to bad e.g "Addiction, Sugar"
Then, I quote "Acceptance, let us love" And this is how I feel in my relationship, I feel accepted with love, and am one with it. Whereas "Let us Love" Is the strangers, we see. Love is an addiction. And every human wants it, some are not so lucky.

Okay so yeah, some analysed parts of my poem. Hope you guys understand it at least a little. You can figure the rest out yourselves.

Barbie xx